Wednesday, August 12, 2009

Simile poems

This school

This school is like a crowded zoo,
There are students everywhere,
Each room is like a separate world
Where no one is giving a care,

The oval is like a circus ground,
Where anything lost cannot be found

The teachers are like animal trainers,
Trying to keep us under control,
They teach us how to do new tricks,
And we teach them to live like a kid.

Mountain

The snow is like blotched cotton wool,
Spread across the crooked rocks.
The plants are like spiky echidnas,
Like a rainforest as we walk,
The air is like a chilled icy-pole
Freshly taken from the freezer,
And the mountain is like nothing I’ve seen before.

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